Traveler PDF is updated.
I've fixed up a few grammatical slip-ups. Semi-colons can be a bitch. After re-reading through the first chapter for the X-hundredth time, it's still not quite right. I've been using a program called CeltX to map out my dialogue in other stories. It's open-source screenwriting software, but it has a lot of nice features to stay organized. Then I take that existing dialogue frame and build a more descriptive piece of writing around it.
I haven't used this process on the Traveler yet, but I think I might give it a shot just to let my descriptions wander without affecting the core dialogue.
In the mean time, I finally released a portion of Chapter 2. I don't know if I'm in love with the crow's role in the story, but Jonathan's personality finally gets to shine through. Although, he does seem like more of a dick than before. I'm hoping that will be understandable once you see what's going on.
The chapter will hopefully be completed soon, but I've got other creative ideas to explore. So, no official timeline.
Check out the latest story here.
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