Short story about my short story

Last night, I started writing a new short story. It's always hard to tell if an idea's good, but I think the piece could have a cool "woah" ending. Obviously, this isn't the type of thing that's easy to pull off and it will surely take many revisions.

I'm keeping hush on the details because I might actually try to get this one published. It might be a pipe dream, but trying never killed anyone (actually that might not be true).

Just to be fun, here's a photo that holds some clue.